tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post7176138712152075392..comments2019-12-21T04:51:46.914-08:00Comments on My Landscape Blue: A Sevenling: No Roses to RememberAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16567470494995213573noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-75760554618432468462012-09-26T22:12:13.037-07:002012-09-26T22:12:13.037-07:00thank you toads!thank you toads!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16567470494995213573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-1663743644734176052012-09-26T16:08:09.392-07:002012-09-26T16:08:09.392-07:00The last line really does justice to the form. I ...The last line really does justice to the form. I was smiling to myself and then I read that line... and paused... and wondered.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-3490947911802999732012-09-25T11:26:42.878-07:002012-09-25T11:26:42.878-07:00I am so torn by this poem--or by the emotions it e...I am so torn by this poem--or by the emotions it evokes in me. The crosswords and Jimmy Dean were enough. No need for roses or dances or TV romance. If only, though, he could be here now with the laughter so barely and rarely recalled.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-69681612269216926702012-09-24T19:25:35.533-07:002012-09-24T19:25:35.533-07:00Not remembering the laughter after 20 years... I ...Not remembering the laughter after 20 years... I hope you don't have someone dear to you traveling a road down Alzheimer's. The last line really grabs me and makes me think.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-52740373041160732122012-09-24T11:43:35.862-07:002012-09-24T11:43:35.862-07:00Oh, your last line is haunting. Oh, your last line is haunting. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-80327312955922996502012-09-24T10:56:05.958-07:002012-09-24T10:56:05.958-07:00Oh, this is intriguing...feels like a story to be ...Oh, this is intriguing...feels like a story to be told in this. Great work!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-27892104125466928132012-09-24T06:15:30.171-07:002012-09-24T06:15:30.171-07:00Wow! This is excellent - especially if it is the f...Wow! This is excellent - especially if it is the first time you have written to the form. You have brought the sense of loss across so clearly - I really felt it.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-82114775515453456202012-09-24T05:40:59.911-07:002012-09-24T05:40:59.911-07:00A nice sevenling ~ I agree that our memories are ...A nice sevenling ~ I agree that our memories are selective, specially with sad and poignant events in our lives ~ But if the memory loss is due to disease, then its even more heart breaking ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-20969026700256839822012-09-24T04:53:21.448-07:002012-09-24T04:53:21.448-07:00Super pretty and intriguing poem - the first stanz...Super pretty and intriguing poem - the first stanza feels especially vivid to me. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-39984108086082447482012-09-24T04:28:57.464-07:002012-09-24T04:28:57.464-07:00This is a VERY good sevenling. You followed the f...This is a VERY good sevenling. You followed the form well, and I love that last line and the way it trails off......<br /><br />(Thank you for your comment on mine. I enjoyed reading your saying about bananas. Indeed sometimes the imperfect in one way is perfect in another.)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5554675313048804494.post-35619917989345856042012-09-24T04:20:02.171-07:002012-09-24T04:20:02.171-07:00A well written poem, and a new [difficult] word!
W...A well written poem, and a new [difficult] word!<br />What more can I ask from a Monday morning?Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.com